In this post, I will take the general structure of my This I Wonder essay and attempt to transform it into a found poem - a technique that will change spacing and the general flow of my prose into a new creation altogether.
The gas stove clicks on My cigarette is lit Confusion runs all about
She enters quietly She looks lost I am too
Smoke is exhaled Words do not come The room is now empty
Towers of boxes stand, quietly Dreams are being dashed Still the words do not come
A chapter ends now A tale never written Remembered by history for the taste of blood
Time moves forward Lives are changed Suddenly, clarity creates happiness
You have a great style of writing. I like how you created metaphors in your poem. You leave something for your audience to remember. Your tone sets a mood. It changes from melancholy to optimism. I really enjoyed this. Great work! :)
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